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The only thing I would suggest is using a stronger beat than the one you come in with. It's a bit strange, and doesn't seem to belong.

When a person buys new shoes, they go to a store, they look to see what they have, and they buy what they like.

They buy the shoes, they don't buy the shoebox.

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Thanks for the comments folks :3

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