Kylethedarkn Posted July 23, 2010 Share Posted July 23, 2010 Ok so here is a track I've been working on for the past couple of days. Its for a white city in the middle of a jungle island. Its history it wrought with strife and yet it is being reinhabited and rebuilt! I was trying to capture the optimism of that reconstruction in the track. I would love to hear some feedback on this and will take any comments and suggestions and use them to better the track. Thanks in advance and I hope you enjoy it: Edit(Beefed up the drums added a vocal sample): http://www.box.net/shared/rpdsr8m06s Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyline Drop Posted July 29, 2010 Share Posted July 29, 2010 I actually like what you've got going here. It has a pretty solid groove. Some rather minor balance issues are kind of throwing it off, though. The melody is a bit obscured when it comes in, I think. Turn that up a bit, and maybe turn down that harp-like sound when it's not the feature. I'd also turn down the vocal sample, because, as it is, it draws too much attention. I'd just have it as a little flourish in the background. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kylethedarkn Posted July 29, 2010 Author Share Posted July 29, 2010 Sorry didn't realize I hadn't updated this version. Here's the newest version with most of what you mentioned fixed. http://www.box.net/shared/825jbqbsok Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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