EWJ 2 Anything But Tangerines - trance mix

[ambient]

OK, so here is another remix that I might revive and work on. This is more or less just the intro, but trust me, there is a pretty kick ass arp that will be incorporated in there once I decide to finish it. I think I actually wrote the arp first.

Anyhow, share your thoughts!

EDIT:

Now v2:

[ambient]

Bump for v2.

[Nase]

where's anything but tangerines? there's some pentatonic stuff that could be vaguely related to the bassline of the original, but otherwise...

correct me if i'm wrong of course, but i find it hard to criticise at this point because there's no remix in it yet.

[ambient]

where's anything but tangerines? there's some pentatonic stuff that could be vaguely related to the bassline of the original, but otherwise...

correct me if i'm wrong of course, but i find it hard to criticise at this point because there's no remix in it yet.

Well, you are kind of right. There are some allusions to the theme, as well as the intro, but the main melody has not yet been introduced. I made the main melody into a trance arp but haven't really arranged all the other parts around it, so decided against including it in the WIP at this point. But since you insist, here is the arp:

EDIT: Also, I would prefer if you would "critique", rather than "criticize". Let's be constructive!

[Nase]

no rush, take your time. i'll listen again once you've fleshed it out.

also, i didn't know there was a factual difference between criticise and critique apart from the fancy french syllable

'criticism' matches your definition of 'critique' in my book. pointing out perceived flaws and merits.

[Gollgagh]

well I think the production is effing sweet

I can't wait to see what you do with it