The Smitchens Posted September 21, 2010 Share Posted September 21, 2010 Ok, here's the link to the song. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=953132&songID=9478350 Go ahead. Critique your hearts out. I've already been informed of humanizing issues. So other than that what do the whole lot of you think could use some improvements? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
melody Posted September 21, 2010 Share Posted September 21, 2010 it's a bit short Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hemophiliac Posted September 21, 2010 Share Posted September 21, 2010 harpsichord has no dynamics, just fyi... meaning it can't get loud and soft. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guifrog Posted September 21, 2010 Share Posted September 21, 2010 Besides the need of variation on notes volumes and tempo, I think you could do something about those chords that go BAM BAM TCHAM TCHAM, specially during 1:03-08. Whatever makes it easier to differentiate the notes on those parts would be good, but that could be just me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hemophiliac Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 Besides the need of variation on notes volumes and tempo, I think you could do something about those chords that go BAM BAM TCHAM TCHAM, specially during 1:03-08. Whatever makes it easier to differentiate the notes on those parts would be good, but that could be just me reposting because it's relevent. harpsichord has no dynamics, just fyi... meaning it can't get loud and soft. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Smitchens Posted September 22, 2010 Author Share Posted September 22, 2010 Thanks for the pointers, guys. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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