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Earthbound - The Giygas Rap


YumeMaxx
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Hi! I'm a new face around here, although I've been a fan for ages.

Anyway, I've been dabbling in video game remixes for a while now, and I figured it was time to take them more seriously and try to improve the quality of my work. So first thing I want to do is fix up my favorite work so that it may be submitted.

Some of you may have heard this when I first submitted it to Youtube two years ago. I like to think my skill has grown considerably since then, so feel free to tell me what adjustments you think I should make to make this song of OCRemix caliber.

The remix (as originally posted on youtube): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k-RIkfPqry0

Among other things, I'd like to re-record some of the vocals and extend the song to include another verse. Maybe change the beat up, too. What do you guys think?

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The line "I'll never run short on my PP" doesn't really work except in print, since it sounds like "pee-pee".

And "please don't pray in my vicinity" doesn't exactly intimidate.

When you rerecord the vocals, you should give Giygas a raspier, breathier voice. All his lines from the fight convey that it's taking a great amount of effort to say them.

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