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Forever Forest Theme - Paper Mario


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I'm working on an orchestrated version of the Forever Forest theme, and here's what I have so far. I haven't added the brass yet (bad composer, bad!), and the ending is a little rough, but I thought I'd throw this up here to get some comments and suggestions. Thanks!

Source:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9YQcrqzLIO8

My version:

http://www.upload-mp3.com/files/241859_mm9ow/Forever%20Forest.mp3

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I hated this theme, until I heard this. :-P

I crit more on production than arrangement, so that's what I'll be talking about.

1. Clippyness. At the beginning, when the harp reaches its lowest notes, there's a whole lot of clipping.

2. Further in, at about half way, there's a whole lot of clipping.

So, to fix that, you can work on volume mixing, or sometimes compression helps.

Other than that, I think you're good.

I'm gonna follow this one. :mrgreen:

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