Speeeven Posted November 9, 2010 Share Posted November 9, 2010 I'm working on an orchestrated version of the Forever Forest theme, and here's what I have so far. I haven't added the brass yet (bad composer, bad!), and the ending is a little rough, but I thought I'd throw this up here to get some comments and suggestions. Thanks! Source: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9YQcrqzLIO8 My version: http://www.upload-mp3.com/files/241859_mm9ow/Forever%20Forest.mp3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ncocs Posted November 9, 2010 Share Posted November 9, 2010 I hated this theme, until I heard this. I crit more on production than arrangement, so that's what I'll be talking about. 1. Clippyness. At the beginning, when the harp reaches its lowest notes, there's a whole lot of clipping. 2. Further in, at about half way, there's a whole lot of clipping. So, to fix that, you can work on volume mixing, or sometimes compression helps. Other than that, I think you're good. I'm gonna follow this one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bacon Boy Posted November 9, 2010 Share Posted November 9, 2010 Sounds pretty good. A bit off at some parts. A agree with ncocs, there is a lot of clipping. That's what made it sound a bit weird for me. I love the direction you're going with this, however. This place needs more Paper Mario music. I like where this is going, otherwise. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Speeeven Posted November 9, 2010 Author Share Posted November 9, 2010 Thanks for the feedback-- yeah, I haven't added anything to limit the sound at all yet, so once I do that the clips should go away (I think). I'm not all that great at production yet. Can it be fixed with a compressor or limiter of some sort? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ncocs Posted November 9, 2010 Share Posted November 9, 2010 Sure can! Don't be afraid to make it whisper quiet or crazy loud in different parts too, as long as it doesn't clip. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MC Ardle Posted September 28, 2011 Share Posted September 28, 2011 ReMix is missing. Could you please repost a link? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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