Full length Alternative Metal song with vokillz!

[sggod89]

So yeah, I think this is some form of metalcore..? Yeah, hope you dig it

http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=10094372

I didn't track the vocals, so it was sent to me with a tad too much reverb. Other than that, I used a POD X3 Live for guitars, Toontrack's Superior Drummer, and Reason 5.

[Cyril the Wolf]

So yeah, I think this is some form of metalcore..? Yeah, hope you dig it

http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=10094372

I didn't track the vocals, so it was sent to me with a tad too much reverb. Other than that, I used a POD X3 Live for guitars, Toontrack's Superior Drummer, and Reason 5.

I like it in general, I think there's too much low end going on with the guitars. Not a lot too much just too much. I also find the guitar to be a little lazer-y, cutting down above 10khz a little would work nicely..

As for the vocals, he's gotta sing less from his throat and more from his diagphragm.

I think there is too much reverb on the snare.

As for the song itself, its basically a slow alt. metal song. Not really metalcore as it doesn't really have the obligatory metalcore breakdown. I do like it, but your singer needs to practice a bit more, and send you dry vocals instead of reverbed the craped out of.

[sggod89]

I also find the guitar to be a little lazer-y, cutting down above 10khz a little would work nicely...I think there is too much reverb on the snare.

I love feedback like this, thanks! I will definitely keep those two things in mind

[erineclipse]

I like it just how it is.