Down to the Ground (Pokémon GSC Burned Tower Remix)

[pokemoneinstein]

Original: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=om0xoAvlmRo

Remix: http://www.box.net/shared/10askcxndd

I know mine isn't too different from the original in terms of OCR standard, it's about as different as my previous "Legends' Lair," but it has pretty different percussion and some added tracks, and a bit of actual remixing, but not a ton. Again, just like Legends' Lair. My goal, again, isn't to make something OCR-worthy, so I won't change this piece too much from where it is now, but I'd still like some constructive criticism to make it better. And, of course, if I make something you think is OCR-worthy along the way, I might as well submit it. But that's my not in any way primary goal. SO what do you guys think?

[Rukunetsu]

Criticism - You've pretty much pointed it out; This wouldn't really count as a remix.

Kudos - Really like how you used different instruments to convey the somewhat repetitive melody of the original, the nice but subtle transitions and the overall clean sound. Great job man.