Legend of Zelda_Kokiri Forest-OOT(Remix) (CVSNB)

[cvstheabstract]

Here is my Remix to

Legend of Zelda_Ocarina of time Kokiri Forest

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qz-kRytk4S0

Feedback would be Nice please im New here =)

Made with Fruity loops 10/9

[DjMystix]

Here is my Remix to

Legend of Zelda_Ocarina of time Kokiri Forest

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qz-kRytk4S0

Feedback would be Nice please im New here =)

Made with Fruity loops 10/9

Welcome to OCR. First thing, the balance, it's more to the right ear; that's an easy fix. Too many repetitions, you might want to change rhythm pattern a bit here and there and also your leads are a little in the background (also it seems like you're using the same instrument for layering the background).

I'm not familiar with the source tune but if you're covering everything that in the source, then it might be a good idea to introduce some original writing OR use another source for less repeating bits. You need to introduce more layers and make your leads more prominent.

Good luck!

[cvstheabstract]

THX for the feedback,Im defiantly Take that Advice to help improve my producing skills

[Rozovian]

It starts with an interesting rhythm, but turns into a mess. 0:59-1:12 is pretty good because it's more sparse, but has some harmony issues like the rest of the track. Learn to hear clashing notes and mix things cleaner, and you'll do fine.