mirev Posted July 6, 2011 Share Posted July 6, 2011 New WIP MIX. Comments appreciated http://soundcloud.com/jdcale/beatainstrumental-wip-ocremix Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rockos Posted July 6, 2011 Share Posted July 6, 2011 MAn it needs works! The intro is sure too long. YOu lose 1:20 for only beat, while we are not hearing the source. This gonna leave you with not enough source to pass. Otherwise it's repetitive. I would try to play a little with the melody. Good luck ^^. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phonetic Hero Posted July 6, 2011 Share Posted July 6, 2011 Agreed. I actually like the bit of variation with the melody that you already have, but it could be expanded a lot. The samples aren't really my bag either, I feel like they could be improved pretty easily. This is a pretty repetitive source to mix, but it's still got some phrases you can play with. I'd recommend listening to some of Mazedude's stuff, he's made entire mixes out of 4 bar phrases (I'm thinking of The Wily Malfunction, specifically). Check him out for some extra inspiration. I'm a big fan of FF8, so I'm quick to be critical of mixes from the game. Don't be discouraged though, keep at it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RobotSmacK Posted July 9, 2011 Share Posted July 9, 2011 I #$%^&* love FF8 You have a good start. I agree with Phonetic Hero and Rockos about the long intro. And personally I like long build ups, I like the mix, but it has to hit way harder than that when it does @ the end of that long @$$ intro, it was a bit of a let down when the melody comes in. Cheeers Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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