Jazz Yard (from Sonic 1 Spring Yard)

[youber]

Here a jazz remix I made from Spring Yard.

If you wish to say something about it, here you can. Thanks

[Vidilian]

I like it but its way too repetitive especially for a genre like jazz and you don't seem to have any orignal parts to it, in other words it seems more or less like a cover rather than a re-arrangement.

So yeah, just add a bit more of your own ideas to it and don't just loop it so the arrangement is more interesting all the way through.

Either way, you seem like you're done with this so my comments are probably pointless.

[youber]

You are right. it's not really finished, but I don't have enough time to take care of it now. I may never be able to finish it, so it will never be part of OCR, and in the end people should see it as a cover :/

But thank you for this comment.

[erineclipse]

something about it seemed out of sync, but i like the overall idea.

[youber]

Out of sync, you mean like out of tempo ? (Sorry, I'm french)