Pokemon Mystery Dungeon - I don't want to say goodbye

[Algamest]

Okay so first off, here is the source:

Aaaaaand here is my remix: http://soundcloud.com/algamest/i-dont-want-to-say-goodbye-1

Just tell me what you think in a constructive way without being too harsh pleaseeee thank youuuu

I would consider it finished but i can always alter it if anyone has any suggestions

[Vidilian]

I'll try and help.

At first I thought the sample quality of some of the intruments were't good enough but I'm pretty sure if you just mix and balance them properly that will make a big difference.

Although when the strings are exposed by themselves they do sound kinda poor quality so try not to let that happen. Speaking of the strings, they're too dominant in the mix. Tone them down EQ and volume wise because they're just ment to be backing instruments the way you're using them. That will let the other instruments be much more clear.