DragonAvenger Posted July 24, 2011 Posted July 24, 2011 Sory about the last one: (Sushifish in the Aquarium). but I only trying to upgrade the original music. I dont Like to lost the originality. because this, i'll do not try again to submiti another like the last one. This is a littlebit diferent from the original. Lets see... Hicky DJ Sonic Henrique Neves Carvalho hicky8djs@hotmail.com Sonic R Living in the City "Nigth, Rain and the City" (feel free to change the name) Tech House Sonic Racing - SEGA Saturn - Traveler Talles - [Richard Jacques composer] Original Track: comments: "I don't know if people wii like this music because the original are unsurpassable. So I make this don't trying to upgrade or anything. I just made it." PS: Sory about my inglish i'm from Brazil. -------------------
OceansAndrew Posted August 22, 2011 Posted August 22, 2011 This is a pretty fun adaptation, but it starts to feel very repetitive. The structure is the same as the original, which is fine, but when the only difference is that the tempo is slightly different, and the voice is vocoded, it's not quite enough for me arrangement-wise to be able to vote yes on, but it's closer than your first sub. The vocals sound just a little behind the beat, and the mixing is decent, but slightly muddy in the low-mids. What really needs work is the arrangement and how it wears down after too many repetitions. I think adding additional countermelodies and more excitement for the second half of the song would really help. No
DragonAvenger Posted September 4, 2011 Author Posted September 4, 2011 There's really not much to add to what Andrew has said so far; right now the structure is very similar to the original, which can be ok, but this becomes super repetitive, and it wears down on you after a while. Overall this needs more variation, including the soundscape as well as arrangement. NO
halc Posted September 25, 2011 Posted September 25, 2011 great choice of source tune. gotta agree with OA though, it's a bit too conservative, and gets pretty repetitive. production was pretty good overall though, the vocals sound cool, and the song definitely had a daft punk feel to it. it's close, but I think you could take this a few more steps forward with the arrangement. really hope to hear this one again. NO(resub)
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