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Super Smash Bros. Master Hand Battle


SmashMaestro721
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<instert phallic reference to mix title>

Just some initial impressions:

Took to long to start up, was a little repetitve

synths are pretty vanilla - layer for a better effect

i liked the piano part, good job on that

drums are repetitive, try switching up the part so it sounds fresh

overall it seems pretty empty, i think with some better leads and more layers, it could be really cool.

Sorry if that sounded sporadic; i was writing while listening.

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I agree with Rexasaurous. The mix is also coming off as rather narrow, everything is feeling almost mono. Try spreading out, as you have lots of room and space that needs filling. The drums really need some attention (Oh the irony, all feedback I get is about me needing to sort out my drums lol). Apart from that, the choir samples either need changing or resequencing. They are very midi-esque.

To summarise:

Add more arrangement-wise, whether it be accompanying motifs or melodies

Vary the drums and try to get some EQ to clean things up

Have a go with polishing the choir sequencing or changing the samples.

You got a good foundation going that just needs more development of ideas and refinement. Hope that helps :)

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