End Credits Theme

[Nostalvania]

This original composition is supposed to be an ending credits theme that plays at the end of an old 16-bit game.

http://tindeck.com/listen/ckew

Feedback is appreciated.

[AngelsDen]

So sweet and Romantic... i love it!!!!

And it somehow reminds me of the Lufia 2 Ending theme (to the future)

As for the Feedback:

- It needs at least a short Intro to build up the mood

- The Overall Arrangement sounds repetetive, but there would be a huge Impact if you just change some Instruments (Mainly the Lead Instrument and leave out the Highbells) at the half of your Song.

[PROTO·DOME]

Yeah, this is straight up fucking good.

Your chords are amazing. Everyone, listen to this guy's chord sequence.

That ending. That middle 8.

Your instrumentation is weaksauce as are the rhythms. More variation! Add drums! Add a bass! Seriously, do it.

EDIT - The bass'd be all: Buuh dah... bi dah di dum, buuh dah...

[Nostalvania]

Thanks for the feedback guys! I'm glad you liked it.

Your chords are amazing. Everyone, listen to this guy's chord sequence.

That ending. That middle 8.

Thanks! Yeah, I love chords! I'm really pleased that you appreciate the middle section. It's my favourite part of the entire piece.

Your instrumentation is weaksauce as are the rhythms. More variation!

The Overall Arrangement sounds repetetive, but there would be a huge Impact if you just change some Instruments (Mainly the Lead Instrument and leave out the Highbells) at the half of your Song.

I think you are right, some variation on the instrumentation couldn't hurt.

Drums? hmm... why not.

- It needs at least a short Intro to build up the mood

Yes, an intro would be nice.