pokemoneinstein Posted December 22, 2012 Share Posted December 22, 2012 https://www.box.com/s/h0pczjt9mixcydlhahw8 So I've got this piece and I don't know where to go with it. There are some parts that I've moved on from that sound unfinished (the piano interlude in particular bugs me) with which I just can't seem to figure out what's wrong. And I also feel like the drive is lost in the song. The beginning is so different from the end. Beyond that, I just don't know where to go after this. The mix is undoubtedly too short, and I want to revisit the ending theme again, but I just can't think of a nice way to keep the song going. Any and all thoughts are appreciated, either for extending the mix, or improving what's already made. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timaeus222 Posted December 22, 2012 Share Posted December 22, 2012 The harp at 0:15 seems to be out of sync with the rest of the instruments. You should quantize that. At 0:35, there's that piano. Hm, maybe you should add a lower octave part to it. It seems too bare with just a high end piano. You might also want to touch up the sequencing a bit if it isn't live or live MIDI. At the end, try changing the final notes to signal that there's more coming up. Right now it sounds like an ending. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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