Legend Of Zelda Ocarina of time. Serenade of water remake

[louiejr2988]

I remade this lovely track hope you all enjoy i wasn't easy doing this

http://tindeck.com/listen/azuz

http://youtu.be/VgbA6UyAclg

http://snd.sc/1d0alQb

Edited July 5, 2013 by louiejr2988

[timaeus222]

Some of the plucked strings are rhythmically off, and the piano chord notes being scrunched together make them sound muddy. A tad too much reverb, but nice effort overall.

[louiejr2988]

thanks i was try to reloop thats why but like i said i did try my best

[louiejr2988]

plus also there wasn't much great sounds bits to used since i did composed it

[louiejr2988]

http://youtu.be/mwrA7O5st-Y

https://soundcloud.com/louiejr2988/senerade-of-water-revised

http://tindeck.com/listen/zasa

[Ethan Rex]

http://youtu.be/mwrA7O5st-Y

https://soundcloud.com/louiejr2988/senerade-of-water-revised

http://tindeck.com/listen/zasa

Sounds better but there's still some rhythmic issues that drag this down. Mostly everything (except for the pad stuff) is centered, pan instruments around to help clean up the mix. Not sure if I like the pluck as an instrument: it sounds like a piano layered over a guitar. If that's the case, then pan each to make that distinction clear, and you might want to choose a more acoustic and less clunky sounding guitar/piano.

This is a pretty nice improvement, keep improving!