Final Fantasy Mystic Quest - Shrine of Light

[michael-collins]

https://soundcloud.com/christophercollins-3/final-fantasy-mystic-quest

I know I have a lot of work to do on my mixing and guitar playing, but I like this arrangement and maybe with some work I can get it on the site.

Let me know how close I am and how much work I have left to do!

[avaris]

Intro is really good. Just boost the volume on it. It is way too quiet compared to the rest of the song.

Also panning in the main section is completely off balance again. An easy way to get panning down better is to listen to commercial songs and literally plot out where different instruments sit in the stereo field.

http://www.propellerheads.se/substance/record-u/index.cfm?fuseaction=get_article&article=part4&short=F3347C96

[Rozovian]

Hey man. Mod Review is for when you think a song is done and could be submitted to ocremix. This song is not done and shouldn't be submitted to ocremix. Not for a while anyway. When it's ready, give it a bump, include a link to the source, and mark it for mod review again.

(you can change the thread prefix if you click edit, then go advanced)

Some quick comments: Intro is pretty, just quiet. The rest of the track sounds like it's got good sounds, just not mixed well. It's really muddy and messy. There's two high-frequency things in the left channel and nothing in the right channel, it makes me think my speakers (or ears) are failing. It's also very short; while there's no lower limit for how long a remix must be, it's got to be a complete song in itself, and sufficiently remixed/personalized/arranged for ocr, and that's hard to get across in a short track.