Hollow Posted November 15, 2013 Share Posted November 15, 2013 Electronic, synths, piano, drums Nothing Left Feedback is welcome and appreciated Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necrox Posted November 18, 2013 Share Posted November 18, 2013 I like the swing feeling that you're trying to bring, but I feel that you could have used more drums (rides, claps, etc). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zack black Posted November 18, 2013 Share Posted November 18, 2013 I like the melody and especially how it plays with the piano, speeding it up was a neat idea too. It might sound a little harsh (you could tweak the sound or add an effect that smooths it out some) Some of your piano arpeggios are a little dissonant at the end (where your melody plays major notes and the piano rolls with minor ones). And yeah give a little time to accenting parts with some different drum sounds, if only to mask repetition. An easy way to start is to take the same patterns and giving them different twists. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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