Schematist Posted February 15, 2014 Share Posted February 15, 2014 I have to thank Timaeus222 for giving me such critical feedback on my tracks. I am starting to look a little closer at smaller details which create the bigger picture. So here is Street Fighter II Theme I am working on. I am not sure what else it needs though. (Constructive Criticism Wanted) https://soundcloud.com/schematist/street-fighter-ii-vega-theme Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timaeus222 Posted February 15, 2014 Share Posted February 15, 2014 (edited) Thanks! xD So, this sounds like some chillout downtempo, which means fine-tuning the drum pattern writing and the bass would really help keep the arrangement flowing. Currently, the drums sound loop-like aside from a few fills. Not only that, but I couldn't find many cymbals. Also, since repetition plays a big part in enjoying a track of this genre, subtle changes in other aspects could help, if only to transition in between sections, such as snare rolls, synth arpeggio lines, descending bass lines, etc. It's partly my opinion, but I think the snare could have some of the lows filtered out to make this sound lighter. The harmonies and chord progressions sound like something to relax to. This is a good adaptation of the original in a new genre, though there are some arpeggios and fluorishes in the that can be added in here. Nice work so far. Edited February 15, 2014 by timaeus222 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Schematist Posted February 18, 2014 Author Share Posted February 18, 2014 Thanks! xDSo, this sounds like some chillout downtempo, which means fine-tuning the drum pattern writing and the bass would really help keep the arrangement flowing. Currently, the drums sound loop-like aside from a few fills. Not only that, but I couldn't find many cymbals. Also, since repetition plays a big part in enjoying a track of this genre, subtle changes in other aspects could help, if only to transition in between sections, such as snare rolls, synth arpeggio lines, descending bass lines, etc. It's partly my opinion, but I think the snare could have some of the lows filtered out to make this sound lighter. The harmonies and chord progressions sound like something to relax to. This is a good adaptation of the original in a new genre, though there are some arpeggios and fluorishes in the that can be added in here. Nice work so far. I can always count on some honesty on your end Timaeus Thanks a million! Going to give it another few listens! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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