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https://app.box.com/s/s8iid64fqtwzz8mxetlf

jazzy mix i made back in November

the original song:

i was pretty liberal with the arrangement. instead of taking the structure of the song and remixing from within, i incorporated bits from the original in a totally different and progressive structure.

sorta took it in a totally different direction, a more winter-y direction. like Petalburg City in the winter ya know

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https://app.box.com/s/s8iid64fqtwzz8mxetlf

jazzy mix i made back in November

the original song:

i was pretty liberal with the arrangement. instead of taking the structure of the song and remixing from within, i incorporated bits from the original in a totally different and progressive structure.

sorta took it in a totally different direction, a more winter-y direction. like Petalburg City in the winter ya know

OMG This is SO GOOD!!! I absolutely love it. It is definitely a more liberal arrangement, but I can still hear Petalburg in there.

One question though... is the very end intentional? It seemed a bit abrupt after the fade-out... not sure if it's due to the program you used?

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OMG This is SO GOOD!!! I absolutely love it. It is definitely a more liberal arrangement, but I can still hear Petalburg in there.

One question though... is the very end intentional? It seemed a bit abrupt after the fade-out... not sure if it's due to the program you used?

Thanks :-)

The ending wasn't exactly intentional, I originally wanted it to just be a fade out. After I heard that feedback though I thought it would be cool to keep it and work with it.

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Sounds pretty enjoyable so far IMO. I think the ride cymbal could use some velocity editing, it sounds a bit mechanical.

I'm not so sure about the last part at 2:20, it sounds like the beginning of a new part but instead it just fades out, hmm.....

The piano chords from 2:36 - 3:21 sound very dissonant.

  • 4 weeks later...
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Sounds pretty enjoyable so far IMO. I think the ride cymbal could use some velocity editing, it sounds a bit mechanical.

I'm not so sure about the last part at 2:20, it sounds like the beginning of a new part but instead it just fades out, hmm.....

The piano chords from 2:36 - 3:21 sound very dissonant.

good advice on the ride cymbal, thanks.

and the dissonance was intentional i promise :nicework:

  • 3 weeks later...
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I agree with Nostalvania. The dissonance doesn't sound intentional, at least after 2:42. The chord at 2:36 was fine. The other ones are like someone mashed some notes on the piano with the palm of their hand.

Also, the TR-808/909 drums you're using fit more of an Electro or Hip Hop context.

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