Dumbluck07 Posted August 3, 2014 Share Posted August 3, 2014 (edited) I Was just wondering if I could get some feedback on the remix im working on. UPDATE I tried to fix it, does this sound any better? feedback woould be appreciated https://soundcloud.com/limberturtle/fzero-silences Edited August 3, 2014 by Dumbluck07 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rozovian Posted August 3, 2014 Share Posted August 3, 2014 There's some nice sounds and good ideas in here, but you don't seem to know what to do with them. For example, you have a really nice buildup that goes nowhere, just hits a high point at 0:12. You have a nice, sparse, relaxed bit at 0:25. The arp backing in the B-part (0:38) is cool. You just seem to have missed the part about arranging these cool ideas into something that flows well and makes sense to the listener. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dumbluck07 Posted August 3, 2014 Author Share Posted August 3, 2014 (edited) There's some nice sounds and good ideas in here, but you don't seem to know what to do with them. For example, you have a really nice buildup that goes nowhere, just hits a high point at 0:12. You have a nice, sparse, relaxed bit at 0:25. The arp backing in the B-part (0:38) is cool. You just seem to have missed the part about arranging these cool ideas into something that flows well and makes sense to the listener. Thanks I can never seem to get the song to make sense. Im at a loss but ill keep working on it UPDATE https://soundcloud.com/limberturtle/fzero-silences does this sound any better Edited August 3, 2014 by Dumbluck07 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timaeus222 Posted August 4, 2014 Share Posted August 4, 2014 seems private. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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