Pokémon Omega Ruby and Alpha Sapphire Prediction - Mt. Pyre Outer Wall

[EpicRPGRemixes]

http://youtu.be/j6xr312N8Ck

Wrote this around a month ago. Any constructive criticism is greatly appreciated!

[Elder Kirby]

Love this theme.

Something about the strings in the background providing the rhythm sounds fake, maybe they're too mechanical. Try a different sample, perhaps.

Your percussion seems overly-compressed, but it might just be youtube. Can you post a mirror? The tambourine in particular sounds very compressed.

The violin lead appears to be fine, but I would add some more release to each cadence.

I think I hear bongos among those drums, but if they're there they're too quiet; I would make them more pronounced.

[timaeus222]

Yeah, the hand drums are overcompressed, and the plucked instrument is locked to the grid. The violin is also pretty unrealistic playing those specific notes. It's just the instrument choice, really. The notes are pretty cool.