Bowlerhat Posted August 30, 2014 Share Posted August 30, 2014 So, I wanted to test my new recording thingy, and arranged a little lost woods waltzy thing. It's pretty simple, but it makes me happy when I listen to it. Any feedback, good or bad, is very appreciated as I might want to improve it into something less simple and more awesome, and feedback tends to help people onto the right track. https://soundcloud.com/jorik-bergman/lost-woods Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
THIEF Posted August 30, 2014 Share Posted August 30, 2014 So, I wanted to test my new recording thingy, and arranged a little lost woods waltzy thing. It's pretty simple, but it makes me happy when I listen to it. Any feedback, good or bad, is very appreciated as I might want to improve it into something less simple and more awesome, and feedback tends to help people onto the right track.https://soundcloud.com/jorik-bergman/lost-woods I think the biggest problem is timing, so if you can shape it up some I can see it growing into something pretty nice. It sounds like you're switching up the melody's rhythm, which is great, but I think you might try having the piano part, or maybe some other instrument, reflect that a little better, to make it sound less awkward, if you know what I mean. I can't say much when it comes to recording, since I'm incredibly new to that myself. Good job though! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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