GSO Posted January 18, 2015 Share Posted January 18, 2015 (edited) Source: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RvzfZaZxqmk My Take: Edited January 23, 2015 by GSO Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XPRTNovice Posted January 19, 2015 Share Posted January 19, 2015 Please get some feedback from the community before switching to mod review. 24 hours is probably not enough time. I've switched this back for you - thanks! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timaeus222 Posted January 23, 2015 Share Posted January 23, 2015 (edited) Sorry, but the violin clearly sounds detached, too dry, and unrealistic. The low bassy drum is hard to hear. It just doesn't feel like the combination of instruments sounds cohesive in the stereo field here. It's too texturally sparse, too dry (too little reverb), too disjointed (incompatible note choices, unrelated melodic contours), and too unfocused (unclear arrangement direction) overall. This would need a lot of work to get to OCR standards. Being the type of person you are, I would suggest making a plan first by writing it out with sheet music so you can hear it before you try emulating real instruments at all. Edited January 23, 2015 by timaeus222 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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