YoshiBlade Posted September 4, 2015 Share Posted September 4, 2015 Yep, been having a go at the compos and not much time for smaller projects, but I've been sitting on this one for a bit and I would love....1) to see it finished 2) to hear some lyrics over it...both lofty goals, but for now I'll just see what you think of it As always Thank You for listening! Remix https://soundcloud.com/yoshiblade1/farron-would Source Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rozovian Posted September 8, 2015 Share Posted September 8, 2015 There's some high-resonance filter things that's a bit painful on headphones. Careful with stuff like that. Nice instrumentation. Arrangement doesn't suggest an ocr-type track, but there's some nice use of the source's first four notes in the background. Transition to Lost Woods doesn't work, clashes too much. Consider a different key for that part. 2:15 transition is as bad as in the source, and nothing interesting save for one new note in the ending delays happens after that... so much like my own attempt at this. Great choice of source. It's a little tricky to break from the pattern and structure of the source, so it's not easy to remix. Not sure trip hop needs a lot of new arrangement, but if you're aiming for ocr, you do need more that this. I'm gonna dig up my wip of this source. This inspired me. Thanks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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