Smooth4lyfe1987 Posted March 26, 2016 Share Posted March 26, 2016 Check out my vocal mix of Aquatic Base from Sonic 2006! I call this "Aquatic Showdown"! Enjoy! If you like my music, subscribe to my YouTube! I have more remixes on there! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ronald Poe Posted March 26, 2016 Share Posted March 26, 2016 Your lyrics are good and have a nice flow to them. That being said, the chorus seems to detach too much from the original and is a little out of place. You could also make the background music a little louder (especially during said chorus). Other than that, it was enjoyable and well done. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smooth4lyfe1987 Posted March 26, 2016 Author Share Posted March 26, 2016 3 hours ago, Ronald Poe said: Your lyrics are good and have a nice flow to them. That being said, the chorus seems to detach too much from the original and is a little out of place. You could also make the background music a little louder (especially during said chorus). Other than that, it was enjoyable and well done. Thanks man! The chorus detached meaning the lyric theme? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ronald Poe Posted March 26, 2016 Share Posted March 26, 2016 No, I meant that the chorus seems melodically out of place. Why not check out my new remix (if you feel like it). Keep up the vocal mixes (you seem good at it). Also your welcome. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smooth4lyfe1987 Posted March 26, 2016 Author Share Posted March 26, 2016 Will do man! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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