Pavos Posted October 9, 2006 Posted October 9, 2006 Alright, so I was messing around a little bit and started a remix of the normal level theme from Super Mario World. I thought it didn't sound that bad, so... My question is: Should I finish this seriously and submit it at OCRemix or should I quit it and stop messing around? Here it is: http://members.home.nl/emmyvankampen/Mario%20JazzWorld.mp3 Second version (only made it longer): http://members.home.nl/emmyvankampen/Plain%20Donut%20Jazz.mp3 The FINAL version: http://members.home.nl/emmyvankampen/Plain%20Donut%20Jazz%20v3.mp3 Quote
electric concerto Posted October 9, 2006 Posted October 9, 2006 That piano is wayyyyy too loud. fix that and you have a great sounding track! Keep working I vote Quote
SulferChlorate Posted October 9, 2006 Posted October 9, 2006 Sounds alright thus far, but you could do a lot more with this track to make it sound even better. I can't tell you what that is, as it's your sound and your track, but I do hope you work more on it. Quote
Dafydd Posted October 9, 2006 Posted October 9, 2006 lol awesome But yeah, you could definitely work more on this. It needs to change into something more serious eventually though, because right now it's a well-done OLReMiX. Quote
Xenon Odyssey Posted October 9, 2006 Posted October 9, 2006 it's a well-done OLReMiX. :no: too good. it's in it's home here (OCR WIP) or R:TS. though that's how it is currently; you can certainly work on it more for OCR. Quote
Dafydd Posted October 10, 2006 Posted October 10, 2006 Ok, I agree, it's too good. But it's too humorous to fit here in its current version, I think. Quote
Pavos Posted October 10, 2006 Author Posted October 10, 2006 Thanks for the feedback guys! Although "humorous" wasn't exactly what I was hoping for Ah well, OCRemix is open for anything, so why not this? At least I hope so. Anyway, I worked some more on it - or rather extended it - and I've got a second version online: Plain Donut Jazz version 2 I've changed nothing to the first part, but I added some more (no real mystery where that come from). And please don't say anything about the ending, it's going to be changed, don't worry. Keep the feedback coming, guys! Quote
electric concerto Posted October 10, 2006 Posted October 10, 2006 er... now I'm hearing Super Mario Bros 3 in there... I love the chip sounds you added! overall, nice! Quote
Pavos Posted October 11, 2006 Author Posted October 11, 2006 Small update... From 2:48 is still in a early WIP stage though, but perhaps some advice on what to add. Here's the link: Version 2.5 Quote
Pavos Posted October 12, 2006 Author Posted October 12, 2006 So, probably the final version of my song. Not very much fans anymore though . Anyway, everything's finished, I'll just polish everything up from here. Unless anybody has got another idea for the WIP that needs to be fixed. Here's the 3rd and final version: Plain Donut Jazz Enjoy! Quote
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