SSB Posted November 11, 2006 Share Posted November 11, 2006 http://files.zenixstudios.com/a98theme_of_love.mp3 Finished? Well here it is, somewhat final. C&C please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
avaris Posted November 11, 2006 Share Posted November 11, 2006 Yes I love FF4, totally biased. Good style to remix the source in. So far it's pretty solid. One thing to keep in mind is dynamics. The melodies seem to have the same dynamics throughout. Vary em up for some good old variation. Also to get a more intimate feel outta this lower the velocity on some of those leads. Make them seem a little softer sounding. Also increase the dynamic range in the melodies that will def give the song a more intimate tone. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSB Posted November 12, 2006 Author Share Posted November 12, 2006 update'd Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSB Posted November 13, 2006 Author Share Posted November 13, 2006 updated again. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zipp Posted November 17, 2006 Share Posted November 17, 2006 I like the source material for this one, and know it intimately. I have to say that this sounds like a case of trying to get your synthesizer to do too much. That main instrument (sax, I think) sounds so "midi" and piercing that I think it takes away from the potential softness and melodious quality of the piece. The piano background is your strongest instrument. Now, I'm not saying it can't be done with whatever equipment you're using. That would be foolhardy of me. No, the arrangement is nice, and should carry the piece. But you need a few more things. First of all, change that main instrument, or soften it more. Smooth out that harshness. Secondly, this piece needs some percussion. Those are my main suggestions. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSB Posted November 18, 2006 Author Share Posted November 18, 2006 Sound quality isn't much of an issue for me now since I've found a professional jazz band willing to help me out. So I'm mainly looking for how to improve the actual arrangement. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ericharris Posted November 18, 2006 Share Posted November 18, 2006 i really like the arragment, but bring out the piano. don't let it just play the chords, piano can be a solo instrument. Everything else is great, looking foward to the final. also, if you need an upright bassist... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSB Posted December 21, 2006 Author Share Posted December 21, 2006 this baby could use a bump. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hemophiliac Posted December 22, 2006 Share Posted December 22, 2006 your link is dead Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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