Shraker Nops Posted December 12, 2006 Share Posted December 12, 2006 This is an origanal song I wrote about a week or so back. I'm thinking about doing some Video Game ReMixing, but first I want to know if I'm good enough first. Here's the link: http://media.putfile.com/Clockwork-27 Note: My new computer is being reparied so I have to use my old one right now and it's not very fast, so you may hear a few pops/clicks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shraker Nops Posted December 18, 2006 Author Share Posted December 18, 2006 *Bump* 10 views...but only 1 listen? that doesn't make any sense at all...uh...a little feedback...please? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dash Myoku Posted December 18, 2006 Share Posted December 18, 2006 Well...it shouldn't be 6 and a half minutes long. Entirely too long for this track. Lots of dead spots where you sort of just drop everything but the bass parts. Not alot of variety, either. I mean, the bass is pretty much the same throughout the entire track, the leads are somewhat nice, but nothing impressive. My opinion? Shorten the song to about 4 minutes, add more variety with the bass, drums and leads. And add some sort of strings in the back ground. Because right now, it's not worth listening to for 6 and a half minutes. Sorry if that seemed a little harsh. But, it's probably about 2 Stars right now. x.x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shraker Nops Posted December 20, 2006 Author Share Posted December 20, 2006 Ya, I had feeling it was to long...shorting it in itself will remove some of the monotony, but still, more varity will be needed! Thx for the comment... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dash Myoku Posted December 20, 2006 Share Posted December 20, 2006 Ah, it's no problem. Just givin' out an opinion, that's all. xP Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sable Posted December 21, 2006 Share Posted December 21, 2006 It's very... Uh... Quiet. Kind of mellow and repetative. I could see it in a puzzle game or Tetris or something. Majhong? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shraker Nops Posted December 23, 2006 Author Share Posted December 23, 2006 Ya, repetitive, I'm going to shorten it by a couple minutes. It seems that people are generaly liking my ReMix though. And about that Tetris comment...well, uh...I was kinda thinking about puzzle games when I was writing it, so thats kindof a compliment in an odd way. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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