ad.mixx Posted January 21, 2021 Share Posted January 21, 2021 (edited) https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/YvRuF Verse 1: I'm hopin' for somethin' to say. To set you off, let you know, now look the other way So don't push your luck with me friend I'm one step away from letting you know how to offend Chorus: I'm just a cowboy, tryna' wrangle my pride i'm just a loud man, whose got something to hide I'm just a coward, keep my eyes off the Lord Lookin' for power, so I can't be ignored Verse 2: I'm hopin' for somethin' to say To let you know, I'm afraid, don't look the other way But if you want me to be your friend Then look me in the eyes again Chorus Bridge: One breath, one time Hold me back from the line (x2) Let me say what I need to say I don't think that I'll need much more I don't believe in fate I don't believe that love Can erase what he said in James 4 It's says that you will resist those who are proud Well you can't resist me friend And all this hope that I feel Yah it's in the sound And I'm thinkin' that you'll like the end. Verse 1 Chorus Edited July 25, 2021 by ad.mixx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ad.mixx Posted January 31, 2021 Author Share Posted January 31, 2021 (edited) Ok, updated. I will put up for Mod review soon, but I'd really like any thoughts on anything now, as it is done arrangement wise. I might add some background vocals during bridge or maybe do something else there to make it more climatic. I just had to delete it and reupload to save your ears. The bridge had some really fucked up vocals that I'm still trying to work out mixing wise. Listen to Cowboy by ad.mixx on #SoundCloud https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/5uyHx Edited February 1, 2021 by ad.mixx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wassup Thunder Posted February 1, 2021 Share Posted February 1, 2021 Hey, I think something went wrong, the link sends me to a page that says the track was not found Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ad.mixx Posted February 1, 2021 Author Share Posted February 1, 2021 (edited) Soundcloud broke my links, third times a charm I guess. I fixed it while I was at it, but am still worried about that bridge being a little cheesy. IDK maybe i'm being a harsh critic. Edited February 1, 2021 by ad.mixx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wassup Thunder Posted February 1, 2021 Share Posted February 1, 2021 It's working now! Wow, this song took me by surprise (good way). The music is full of haunting synths and pads, accented by those plucks and chiptune sounding elements. The vocals also carry a spooky vibe with the filter effects, and the lyrics have an amazing emotional blend of eerie, bitter, and almost dangerous to me. Especially with the Christian references in it. I didn't really find the bridge cheesy. The backing vocals contribute a pretty nice effect, being on the higher sound spectrum. Very fascinating work, I hope you get ahold of a moderator for the real professional feedback you deserve! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ad.mixx Posted May 15, 2021 Author Share Posted May 15, 2021 (edited) just a bump, when i get back computer back from shop ill probably be finishing this up first thing. kinda wanna get it out the way. any ideas are helpful. i turned down the plucky instrument in a newer version but can't access it atm. EDIT: oh yah, I don't need a review on source usage. I mean it's pretty much all there note by note, same tempo. Didn't actually modify the song itself, just arranged it in a different way and threw vocals on top of it. All vocal melody lines are original. And the first chorus with chiptune is a completely original section. Edited May 17, 2021 by ad.mixx Said off when I meant down Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ad.mixx Posted July 25, 2021 Author Share Posted July 25, 2021 https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/YvRuF Finally finished it up. Subbed and will hopefully be accepted. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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