ShinnyMetal Posted January 1, 2007 Share Posted January 1, 2007 I only started this last night..I wasn't expecting it coming out like it did BUUT...I like it sooo....here ya go GILGA-MASH! (old) Press Start! (click here) NEW the man of mystery (updates) Man of Mystery (perhaps "What the Mesh?" ) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShinnyMetal Posted January 2, 2007 Author Share Posted January 2, 2007 UPDATES: did some volume levels better and fixed a few things ..im going to redue some parts (ending and begining) soon I also realize it is very quiet...probably because when working in reason with these headphones it is overly loud...so i'll fix that soon also Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kamoh Posted January 4, 2007 Share Posted January 4, 2007 I think this one has a lot of promise, a couple of points I'd like to hit before more help comes along: The intro reveals the song too early, IMO. If you just hinted at each part of the main phrase it'd have a greater impact. You can tell the piano is canned in the intro - it needs more reverb, a little bit throughout. Transition into the main (louder) section is spotty, and needs to flow more effectively. Consider a rising drumset beat. Percussion is too basic and could use a lot of creativity, and just more sound throughout the main section. It's a good start, but a long way from an OCRemix right now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShinnyMetal Posted January 4, 2007 Author Share Posted January 4, 2007 yeah I figured...I personally wantetd to have a sudden transition...like it was unexpected...but im starting to have doubts if thatly work out like that. Im using presets for drum...im just not good at drums generally... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShinnyMetal Posted January 12, 2007 Author Share Posted January 12, 2007 update...w00t... http://www.tindeck.com/audio/my/1ojos Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShinnyMetal Posted January 14, 2007 Author Share Posted January 14, 2007 BUMP! cause I can... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloral Posted January 16, 2007 Share Posted January 16, 2007 That's definately sounding a lot better. You've clearly been tuning the levels of the instruments and as a result the body sounds a lot fuller. I'm not particularly digging the keyboard that comes in at 2:26 though. It's like the fullness you had established earlier in the song is suddenly gone. I kinda get where you're going with it, but to me it feels like the other instrumentation that fell silent at that point should come back in shortly rather than disappearing entirely for the remainder of the song. That said, with the improvement you showed in your previous update it's clear to me that you're going in the right direction and if you keep at it, you'll end up with something pretty nice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShinnyMetal Posted February 10, 2007 Author Share Posted February 10, 2007 http://www.tindeck.com/audio/my/3lcg8 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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