Liontamer Posted February 18, 2007 Posted February 18, 2007 remixer name: MRgoomba remix title:move your yoshi plateform: N64 game: yoshi story and smash bros style: rock (i think ,,,) original composer:koji kondo (i m not sure ) enjoy:) "yoshi!" ----------------------------------------------------------------- v Original Soundtrack - 02 "Yoshi's Story" & 03 "Yoshi's Song" The original composer's Kazumi Totaka, FYI. LIGHTNING ROUND *Decent energy *Timing on the various guitars needs to be tighter *Needs more sophisticated supporting instrumentation writing for better/fuller textures *Repeats near-verbatim at 1:05 aside from different cameo phrases from other Mario games, i.e. little-to-no development of the source arrangement *Last section at 1:47 simply petered out In short, not tight enough, not complex enough, not developed enough. NO
Vig Posted March 11, 2007 Posted March 11, 2007 timing aint great on the guitars, and the guitarists miss a lot of the note attacks. the bassing and drumming are pretty good. arrangement is really straightforward, not a lot of interpretation at all. nice start though. bass playing in particular is crisp. NO
big giant circles Posted March 25, 2007 Posted March 25, 2007 I don't know about anyone else, since neither Larry nor Vig mentioned it, but the drums + bass + lead guitar made the mix sound really hollow to me. Ok, I take that back, looking back at Larry's vote Need more sophisticated supporting instrumentation writing for better/fuller textures Plus, I'll echo the concern about the level of rearrangement here. You've taken a few riffs and inserted them here or there, but nothing is really expanded upon. Fun little diddy, but unfortunately not geared for the final cut. Better luck next time. I like your approach, just bring more to the table in future submissions. NO
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