Doom E1M1 my other first remix

[Evfan42]

this is the other one I've been working on, the beginning isn't too great, Im still making it, but tell me what you think. of the rest.

http://www.sharebigfile.com/file/107891/Doom-E1M1-WIP-mp3.html

il prolly re-do the beggining like I have many times

[chrono26]

i'm not familiar at all with the original song but this sounds cool. you could get by with the fakey guitar thing but the drums sound way to midi-ish. give em' some punch, ya know? and switch up the beat too. you've got steady eighths on the hat and 2 and 4s with the snare. add a little variety. and i dont think i can even hear the kick. there's not much here, sounds more like an intro but keep working it out. do whatcha do

[Evfan42]

guitar thing but the drums sound way to midi-ish. give em' some punch, ya know? and switch up the beat too. you've got steady eighths on the hat and 2 and 4s with the snare. add a little variety. and i dont think i can even hear the kick.

yeah, I know, but what I think what im going to do is record myself playing the drums, cause that is my instrument, but I want to do that after everything is set.