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I can see this growing into a good track. You've got awesome source material. I think making it sound a little less electronic and more instrumental would benefit the piece.

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Dude, it's so nice seeing the source provided AND a reliable, easy to use server being used! Yay!

My thoughts:

I don't like the string instrument in the intro. Give it some FX love (reverb/chorus/bla bla)! Wow the song starts ABRUPTLY at 0:14! I personally hate those 90's synths; maybe some folks will disagree but I have a feeling the general opinion will be that this one used here sounds generic and thin... I kinda like it when it plays lower notes actually. Maybe try transposing down an octave? Just a thought.

This is very close to the original -- too close for OCR's standards (by my guess). It's also very sparse. Maybe add some nifty beats?

I'm not sure what you were going for with the ending; super-simplified chiptune? Honestly it kind of sounds like you haven't finished the ending yet, so I hope that's not it.

Hope that helps!

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