SageQuartz Posted May 16, 2007 Share Posted May 16, 2007 I'm not sure if this song is finished or not.. But if there is anything that I should fix, please tell me! I must know! ^.^ http://h1.ripway.com/SageQuartzRemix/Freez-RMX.mp3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ocremixfan Posted May 16, 2007 Share Posted May 16, 2007 Welcome to OCR! Well... I'll try to give some of my impressions: - Personally I don't like the 8-bit style of many instruments/samples/whatever-you-guys-call-them you use... more realistic ones are much better, IMHO - Less reverb seems a nice idea - I can't recall exactly the original tune, but it seems that you hadn't performed much arrangements over it; make sure you had, otherwise it won't be accepted, no matter how good is your remix That's what I'm able to say. Wait for some tips to work over! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted May 16, 2007 Share Posted May 16, 2007 Yeah, man, I agree with OCRemixgfan. It follows the original a bit to much. Sounds kinda like a midi rip. You should really play around with the melody a bit more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SageQuartz Posted May 17, 2007 Author Share Posted May 17, 2007 Well, thank you for your replies ^^ I listened to it over and over, and I couldn't figure out if it was ready or not. Thanks a bunch :3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SageQuartz Posted May 17, 2007 Author Share Posted May 17, 2007 I need to ask one more thing... What parts should I fix? Is the beginning Okay? Middle? Ending? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ocremixfan Posted May 17, 2007 Share Posted May 17, 2007 First of all, take some to listen to some of the remixes on OCR to get a grab o the style... I don't know if you listen to OC remixes for some time or not. Pick some acclaimed mixes from nice remixers... like zircon, DarkeSword, Blue Magic, djpretzel, sephfire, snappleman... just to mention a few. You probably like FF7 (aeris...), so I give you some personal suggestions: http://ocremix.org/remix/OCR00586/ http://ocremix.org/remix/OCR01557/ http://ocremix.org/remix/OCR00956/ Some other good mixes (from zircon): http://ocremix.org/remix/OCR01219/ http://ocremix.org/remix/OCR01450/ http://ocremix.org/remix/OCR01558/ About your mix, until you try some rework over it, some things I could say: - 0:35-1:38 - same beat/rythm throughout, with some additions each one at a time... it was boring - 1:58-2:06 - harmony missing (is that it?) - 2:55-3:36 - a style quite different from the rest of the mix... I'm not sure if it fits That's it! Try enhancements little by little, and keep asking for feedback! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SageQuartz Posted May 18, 2007 Author Share Posted May 18, 2007 Yep, I've been a OCremix fan for quite a while now ^^ (for about 4 or 2 years...) I finally joined the website a few days ago though. Anyway, I want to be apart of it, since the music inspired me so much ^^ Okay! Thank you a whole bunch X3 I'm going to try to make this work as much as I can ;D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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