PlastikBag Posted August 15, 2007 Share Posted August 15, 2007 So I'm enjoying this a lot more than I had ever imagined. If you haven't it checked out, "Essence of a Dream" is done (for now). I might touch on it again once I learn more, but anything I try to do to it right now just seems to make it worse. http://blabstation.net/jerry/Essence%20of%20a%20Dream.mp3 And here's my 2 new WIPs. "Dismembered Puppets" is somewhat obscure. It's somewhat ambient, somewhat industrial. I have more written for it right now, but I'm struggling making transitions into the parts. "Adrenaline" is some DnB, I started making drum loops in order to get better at it, and this one turned into song. The arrangement for both songs isn't complete yet, but I'll keep you posted with updates. Check 'em out: http://blabstation.net/jerry/Dismembered%20Puppets.mp3 http://blabstation.net/jerry/Adrenalinev2.mp3 UPDATE: http://blabstation.net/jerry/AdrenalineNew.mp3 Enjoy! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiowar Posted August 17, 2007 Share Posted August 17, 2007 Dismembered Puppets is pretty good, some interesting things happening. The drums are way too loud though. Could use some more variation as well. It's repetitive and loop-ish but for a beginner it sounds pretty good. Adrenaline starts off with good energy but eventually it sort of flatlines. The drums could be more interesting, try chopping them up a bit. Same comments as before about it being repetitive. Not bad though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PlastikBag Posted August 17, 2007 Author Share Posted August 17, 2007 Thanks much for the feedback. I have to agree with you 100% on the drums for both songs. I'm trying to work on them, though I have no idea of how to slice drums up with Reason. I think you can do it with the Rex player but I don't know how to convert a drumloop I made with the drum computer into a rex file. Anyone know of any good tutorials? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tyrog Posted August 27, 2007 Share Posted August 27, 2007 Plastik Bag sounds good. Dismember Puppets and Adrenaline's sound is quite blurry, can you fix it? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PlastikBag Posted September 24, 2007 Author Share Posted September 24, 2007 Big update to Adrenaline. A bunch more variation, better build up, much much better mastering, and some more content. I think I'm getting better! Check it out, and enjoy. http://blabstation.net/jerry/AdrenalineNew.mp3 And thanks for the comments. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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