chiacho Posted September 17, 2007 Share Posted September 17, 2007 my first song ive remixed http://boomp3.com/m/62c85a744853 original song Beware of Forest Mushrooms from SMRPG: Legend of the Seven Stars please any suggestions on my first remix? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zephyr Posted September 17, 2007 Share Posted September 17, 2007 Probably shouldn't be in this forum, Try WIP next time... but besides that you may want to do more than just take the midi and apply way to much FM. Frequency modulation can add a lot but this has about 3000% too much of it. A song should depend on melody more than anything else. I'm not sure if this is a midi rip or not, but it's hard to tell because of way too much FM. Tone that down and work more on melody ok? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skrypnyk Posted September 17, 2007 Share Posted September 17, 2007 I'm trying to think of a better suggestion then 'use less suckage', but man, is it hard =( . Learn how to make a song, learn more about Fruity Loops, learn more about sampling and synths, learn more about remixing, learn more about everything else about mixing, mastering, producing, creating, etc., then try again. n yea wrong forum. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunahorum Posted September 17, 2007 Share Posted September 17, 2007 I thought the melody was awesome. The drums were really muddy though. If this had a solid drum thing going it would be good. The bass also didn't sound very good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yoozer Posted September 17, 2007 Share Posted September 17, 2007 Yeah, this sounds like a MIDI rip. The pitch of the bass guitar is off, the sound in the intro is off. Plus, the sound you use for everything is completely unusable - it's like you just found out how a LFO > filter works and thought it'd be nice to throw it over everything. Also, why does the rhythm drop away suddenly? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zephyr Posted September 17, 2007 Share Posted September 17, 2007 I didn't want to be too harsh but they're right, like I said, way to much Frequency LFO and it sounds like just a midi rip, keep learning though, you'll get better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunahorum Posted September 17, 2007 Share Posted September 17, 2007 if this had a clear snare and kick drum going with a bass it would sound good I think? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yoozer Posted September 17, 2007 Share Posted September 17, 2007 No, then the bass'd still be off and the sound choice would still be wonky. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skrypnyk Posted September 17, 2007 Share Posted September 17, 2007 Plus the overall sound will still be poor, and the arrangement will still be midi-ripish and boring. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zephyr Posted September 18, 2007 Share Posted September 18, 2007 Plus the overall sound will still be poor, and the arrangement will still be midi-ripish and boring. True, but aside from those few things I have absolutely no problems with it, haha. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chiacho Posted September 18, 2007 Author Share Posted September 18, 2007 thanx everyone for the suggestions next song will be way better i promise Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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