Chrono Trigger -- Void in Time

[Tuned Logic]

I'm trying many ideas with this tune (Memories of Green) until i hit the bullseye. Please have a listen and leave comments.

Thanks for your support.

EDIT: Whoops, forgot the link. That would be helpful, wouldn't it?

http://www.sendspace.com/file/jw12mc

[Sole Signal]

Link?

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[Rozovian]

Boring drums. I do nbotice there's variation but they're still boring. The whole piece is boring, as there's rarely much that provides momentum. I like the arrangement, but it's way too repetitive, in terms of dynamics. The bass instrument gives it a very cheesy electronic feel, while the rest is pretty cool electronica-jazz-ambient thing. I like how laid-back it is, it's got a really cool sound.

So do something about the drums, maybe shove them further into the background and bring them up when they should be more up-front. Make the theme a little more obvious. Change the bass, please.

Overall, this piece is cool. Boring at the moment, but cool anyway. It needs a few fixes, but is already worth listening to.