very nicely done.  If I hadn't stolen the ROM from my sister, i never would have ever even looked at this one.  It feels very sad and wistful.  The flute/recorder thingy solo is excellent, but i thought the ending kind of...dropped off into nothingness.. i'm not sure if that what you were going for.  nevertheless, great job on your first work.  one more thing, i like the melody a lot and the guitar hidden in there!