aCloudConnected

Pretty much what everyone else is saying, very cool concept and very sexy beat, but that's just all it is. There's not enough meat to it. I definitely think overhauling it with different instrument voices would breath so much more life into it, because in my opinion, it's just the original with a hip hop beat under it with some slicing. Keep working at this though, I'm really curious to see what you make.

So this is something that I've been working on for a little while, and I hope to have an album of sorts out sometime soon for download. The songs are a bit rough, as I've made them in FL Studio and have done little mixing on them outside of some basic panning and volume swells. I plan on making them all sound nice once I've got a good set of songs. Link is in my siggy. Any criticism would be gladly accepted, though the constructive variety is preferred :3 This is my first post here on Overclocked so let me know if it's in the wrong place or I'm doing something wrong.