Kiriser

I'm a total noob to the world of music so I can't give much technical crticism. I shall try anyways though. There is a nice fluidity during the transitions between the track's various motives, however there is a bit of a lack in consistency in the overall melody. Following through a stream of thought.. The piece isn't necessarily a theme but an exposition.. A nice exposition to your potential as a musician? Try accomplished! I'll be on my way now.