[pokemoneinstein]

Those of you who saw it may remember my reorchestration of a song called Spat's Theme a while ago. This is in the same vein as that. it's not really a remix, so I don't intend on submitting it, but I'd still love feedback to see what people like/dislike, and see if anyone thinks there are any correctible flaws. It's pretty much finished, so something like "Change the volume here," or "add this instrument in this part" is the type of criticism I'm looking for. No huge overhauls.

The percussion in the middle is pretty minimalist, and I'm thinking of adding counters to the end bit where it gets very intense. I'm also thinking of turning down the master volume at that point, but I'm not sure. Opinions on these issues are very welcome.

I'm also pretty sure it's in a different key than the original, which sucks. But it's too late for that. Anyone wanna check that out for me, I'm not too good at theory stuff?

Original: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v8WN_4lk6GA

My version: http://www.box.com/s/0ixdudchm46322qontfg

What do you think?

[Chimpazilla]

I don't have anything helpful to add... but that sounds FABULOUS... what sample library did you use?

[pokemoneinstein]

I used EWQLSO Gold. And thank you very much!

[Kirvee]

From my headphones, almost ALL of it is really focused on the right side....

It sounds epic but distorting because it's unequal....

[MikeViper]

The overall orchestration is good. But it doesn't really add much to the original. Not that that's a bad thing.

[therex]

I can agree that it's very right heavy.

Good instrumentation. You could stand to swell the volume at at the last section (the climax).