You did a well rounded job, all around. The lyrics are likeable, the vocals aren't bad, and the music composition is the greatest. You really brought out the Gerudo Valley to life in my mind. That music is my favorite and most inspirational song in Zelda 64.
I'm not a singing expert, but here's my advice:
Calm yourself when singing. You sounded like you were stressing yourself to sound like someone else.
You sound like you have some pitch control problems, too. Don't try to swtich notes too fast. It's better if you smoothe the notes together instead of being so stacato.
I'm wondering, can you release a version without the vocals? (Nevermind that question, I just read your reply.)
