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Love the latest rendition, the bass comes in real well and the drums sound great. Only problems I have is that the bass is a bit over the rest of the composition in some of the places (so maybe tone it down a smidgen of a bit), the snare sounds kind of weird; so maybe tweak that a little and the synth that comes in at 2:15 is REALLY rough, consider playing with the EQ on the synth a bit.
Other than that; there's nothing wrong with what you've contributed, it all sounds WONDERFUL (even the snare); it just needs some leveling and cutoff work.
* Fine tune that snare, so it sounds a little better.
* De-Amplify the bass just a TINY bit.
* Work the synth lead that starts at 2:15 so it's not so rough.
BTW, thanks again for all of the help, I've included your name in the post; and when it's ready to submit, I'll make sure to give credit then too.