I like the direction your headed with this arrangement. I personally think that you introduction sounds fine. However, I am having a hard time telling where your intro leaves off and the transition to the main part begins. Perhaps you could try moving the fade in effect around a little.
Hope that helps a little. I'm sure that it will turn out fine no matter what you choose to do. Keep up the good work!
The intro is simply ingenious. I have always thought that it would be cool if someone were to make a remix using the sound effects from the original game. You have some pretty crazy skills.
After carefully listening to all of the tracks on the album, I have finally claimed this one to be my favorite of the bunch. There are many other songs that I love on this album, but there's something special about this one. Great work.