[Sonic and the Black Knight: "With Me" Remix WIP (Critique welcome)]

Seriously, ANY help at all would greatly help me.

[Sonic and the Black Knight: "With Me" Remix WIP (Critique welcome)]

http://www.box.net/shared/hugqxa5ant7dlt5rqghb

I'm new here and really looking to improve. I've been working on this song for a few days now and I've kind of been stuck on where I want it to go.

EQ and instrument choice are somewhat final. I'm trying to achieve a Drum n Bass style through this song, but I feel like I'm not pulling out some element of the song enough.

Suggestions, anyone?