Thanks so much for posting your suggestions! I've made note of them and will see what I can do
To Cash: Yes, I sing and play violin! I plan on incorporating both into this remix, so I am trying not to use the melody too much until I record those parts. The beginning part after the pad is indeed strings, I will look into making them sound more realistic. I agree that they sound a bit fake (I am currently using Magix Music Maker 2013 for this... It's very user-friendly but some of the samples could be much better). I recently got FL Studio 11, but I haven't gotten around to learning it's complex interface haha. Also, one thing about me is: I. LOVE. REVERB. Sometimes I overdo it though haha so I can definitely try to tone it down for the piano part
Timaeus222: Thank you! I am so happy you enjoyed my violin/vocal work on Perfection! Omni-Psyence is such a great remixer! I will see if I can find a softer-sounding pad, since I believe you are saying that this one seems a bit harsh. I have added something halfway into the piano part, and expanded a little bit from there.
DarkDjinn: Thanks! I hope I can make this sound as epic as it is in my head
I worked on it more while waiting for some suggestions, so here's an updated version. I apologize that I haven't really changed anything, but I will be sure to include your suggestions for the next update
https://soundcloud.com/teracmusic/terrasthemetechno-mp3/s-QjwuT
P.S.- I want this 'remix' to be anywhere from 4-6 minutes long, so it definitely is not done yet Just keep that in mind!