I dont know why but the intro reminds me of little eyes from Yo La Tengo. I know it's a stretch, but it does.
All in all, it's sleepy. Sounds like something Annie Lennox would sing... and I would promptly change the station on the radio.
I don't like how the synths go with what you're singing. It comes across cheesy. Let your voice pull off the melody, not the synth... unless you want to add some much needed bass with your voice via the synth.
I know you said not to bust on the vocals, but you have a lot of work to do before this is production. If you can't hit the "yeaaah" note, don't sin